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Japanese newspapers still flow text right to left and vertically, top to bottom! What is even more impressive is that Japanese OCR software, such as Fuji Xerox's DocuWorks Desk, understands this!
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As many others have mentioned, Google translate is awful when in comes to Japanese.
I have been studying Japanese for quite some time and even I am sometimes mislead by the weird formatting of various web pages. Since no one else has mentioned it, I will try to help a bit here with the language side of it -- typically you don't see Japanese words broken up between lines since it makes it harder to read (esp with Kanjis that have multiple readings). What this means is that "ideally" you would break up sentences on "particle" and word boundaries. Particles are "markers" that help identify the subject and object etc. Parsing for these is way beyond this type of discussion, and require some working knowledge of the language. Also, to make it harder yet, spaces are not necessary NOR required in Japanese writing (western style punctuation use has crept in though). As a rough algorithm though (if you cannot read nor parse for real particles/words) you could assume any Kanji followed by Hiragana is a word (until you hit a period or another Kanji or Katakana). Also, Katakana are single words too (typically foreign words like "code" in your case). In your case:
好き (すき)
is a single word (to like/love, depending on context) and shouldn't be broken up with a line break (IMHO). Following this algorithm would break up the sentence like:
私は, ____ コード ____ が ___ 好き
which gives four "words" -- it turns out that for this case you have 2 particles は and が ( for those keeping score ) but keeping them attached to their prior "word" isn't typically too confusing to read.
This was probably too long winded for this question but I hope it helped some.
Bill
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If you remove Iron Man’s suit, is he left Stark naked?
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If Iron man and the Silver Surfer decided to join forces, would they be alloys?
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Um...20th April...[^]
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oh yeah, that must be where I heard it.
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I had to check my records to see if I had posted it already!
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That's a good one. Did you think of it all by yourself? Is it original?
I guess I'll google to see...
Guess not...
Google started typing for me and found the phrase and numerous links and...
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Well, it was a good one. +1
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Would he change a Fe?
Mongo: Mongo only pawn... in game of life.
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This super hero was originally called Ion Man which was a more positive role model, I feel.
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If he only removed his bottom half, he'd be Toe-Knee Stark naked.
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:groan:
Software Zen: delete this;
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It's the very first time I've seen that photo
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So I'm writing a murder novel. Here's a snippet. I'd like your feedback please.
Sorry, the formatting isn't too good...
The Priest turned on his cell phone and it immediately buzzed. He tapped the instant message icon and saw a new unread message from the day before:
"As Elijah was taken to heaven, so shall we. Praise be to God. I suggest you read
2 Kings 2:11"."
"Thank you, I will Brother." he replied, "God Bless"
He tapped the delete icon and the message disappeared. He then turned off the phone, opened the cover, and removed the SIM chip, dropped it into the toilet and flushed. He got dressed and left, dropping the burn phone into his neighbor’s trash.
20 minutes later he exited the 40 onto St. Joseph’s Drive and pulled into the parking lot of the Archdiocese of Santa Fe Catholic Center, parked and went inside. The Center consisted of a typical brick church with thick mahogany doors and a steeple, a rectory, and a Bible study center. In the study center there was a reading room and he pulled open the door and went in. There were a few people sitting at tables reading and working on laptops, and no one paid him any attention, save for the one casual glance as he walked by. It was not unusual for the general public to come use the Center’s study room for personal or educational study. It was well lit, quite, and out of the way – all good reasons for he used it for his purposes.
There was a collection of old gilded bibles and other study materials on wooden shelves against the back wall. He removed a large King James Bible from the bottom row and flipped open to 2 Kings 2:11. In between the sheaves of manuscript was an 8" x 11" sealed envelope with no markings. He removed it, replaced the bible, and left.
He returned to the car and tore the end off the envelope and tipped it up, sliding out the contents. In the envelope was a 5" x 7" photo of an older Japanese man, and 3" x 5" card with a Japanese name and an address typed on it, and nothing else. He didn’t expect there to be more, as there never was.
The Priest was really a nickname he had acquired while in the Special Forces. Like most SpecOps guys he was proficient in a number of trades, but his religious principles had been something unique to him in his team, and the other members had taken to calling him "Father" and then later "Priest". Some would even come talk to him when the chaplain wasn’t around. He maintained his faith and biblical studies while in the Army, but after he got out he gradually drifted away. 12 years of traveling the world taking lives while risking your own hardens a person and he gradually lost his faith.
After leaving the Army he had been recruited by the CIA, and the name Priest, and his religious background were good cover. Anyone who might actually intercept his text messages and tried to make something of it wouldn’t find the name unusual given his past.
He studied the photo and the address and 10 minutes later had them committed it to memory. He got out of the car with the photo and card, pulled a lighter from his pocket and lit both on fire, dropped them to the ground, and watched them burn down to nothing. He stomped out the remaining flame and scattered the ashes to the breeze with his foot.
He got back in his car and pulled away, wondering what this Japanese guy had done to deserve a visit from him.
If it's not broken, fix it until it is
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What, no dinosaurs?
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They're in the chapter after the one on Bacon
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Phew!
I might read it then!
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Well, if you want my opinion:
it's too narrative
the use of past tense weakens the narrative
needs more "what is the character thinking and feeling"
For example:
Kevin Marois wrote: The Priest was really a nickname he had acquired while in the Special Forces. Like most SpecOps guys he was proficient in a number of trades, but his religious principles had been something unique to him in his team, and the other members had taken to calling him “Father” and then later “Priest”.
vs.
"His unique religious principles earned him the nickname The Priest by his Special Forces teammates."
Also consider more "seeing through the eyes of the character and what he's thinking a feeling."
For example:
Kevin Marois wrote: In the study center there was a reading room and he pulled open the door and went in. There were a few people sitting at tables reading and working on laptops, and no one paid him any attention, save for the one casual glance as he walked by.
vs.
"A quick glance of the study center eased his tension, seeing only a few people sitting at tables, too immersed in their laptops to even notice him as he casually strolled over to the bookshelf of gilded bibles, ironically the drop point for his orders."
But I'm not a writer, so take my comments with a grain (or two) of salt!
Marc
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Wow, good input.. I like it
Thanks
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Marc Clifton wrote: the use of past tense weakens the narrative
Most fiction tends to be written in the past tense, to the extent that I find fiction written in the present tense really annoying.
I've only read a couple of books written in the present tense, and I've spent more time being annoyed at the tense than enjoying the book.
"These people looked deep within my soul and assigned me a number based on the order in which I joined."
- Homer
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Seconded.
And doing a novel in present tense or first-person is like a design decision in software... Plan for it from the beginning, and pick the one that's most appropriate, or it'll bite you later.
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It's interesting and what I would add is that the writing has something of a staccato feel to it.
This may be what you are aiming for however my preference is for more flowing prose.
Your use of 'He' to start a sentence may not be necessary, as we know who you are referring to e.g 'He opened the door and walked out into the hall' can be 'Opening the door and walking out into the hall'.
I am not a writer so you probably know much more about the trade than I do, but I thought I would give my opinion if it helps
“That which can be asserted without evidence, can be dismissed without evidence.”
― Christopher Hitchens
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I certainly helps. Thank you
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